by Syzoth
Thank you for the shout-out in the intro, you're welcome! It's a pleasure proofreading your stories, they're so fun and wonderful and sexy. The love and adoration you have for Amanda jumps off each and every page. Your wife is a lucky woman, Sy! I want more stories to proofread! LOL!!!
XOXO
No shortage of action in this story. Syzoth serves up his pregnant wife Mandy to his friend while he services his friend's pregnant wife. The author's writing continues to improve. Something here for everyone.
Good descriptive sex scenes. Felt like I was there in the middle of the action.
Banging 2 hot chicks is every man's dream. Story would've been even hotter if Syzoth and Scott got each other's wife pregnant!
I'm guessing Amanda is more fake than real but goddamn she seems fun and sexy. Even if she's 100% fiction, she's still a great literary character! Haha!
Great sex scenes, really enjoyed them 'cause they gave nice visuals.
Story followed a line of thought, but could've been written better so minus 1 star. But definitely worth a read.
Oh you poor man, caring about the "pet agree" of your sluts offspring?
Love naughty wives. Please continue this.
Hate stupid negative troll comments. Please continue to delete.
Other than that, it's right down the middle. Not particularly Hot or Sophisticated just good old racquetball recreational sex. Nothing wrong with that! Just don't favor it anymore.
The best part was when Amanda had her head low as she's blowing Scott in the back seat of the car then reappeared and she wiped her mouth clean. I damn near creamed my pants just reading that one part!
Wife sharing is an acquired taste, as is swinging, so it’s not for everyone. But if you’re interested but think you’d never actually do it, Syzoth has provided us voyeur types a suitable, no risk substitute. Pretty hot, too. Thanks, author for sharing your considerable talents and a hot beach photo of the lovely Amanda. Yes, very easy to imagine Amanda indulging herself and the lucky author-husband. Hope to read more.
Most people who go skiing wait for after the mountain to enjoy après ski fun. But the again, some couples just can’t keep their hands to themselves!
One of the best stories Sy has written so far.
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VitriolHack
Enjoyed the chapter. I get that sometimes people get aggressive during sex but I could have done without the "violent" descriptions of otherwise loving sex.