All Comments on 'Sharking Day Pt. 02'

Wow! For a story that took 12 years to complete the wait was worth it. I haven't even finished it as the story had it's intended effect twice in the first 6 pages. I'm really looking forward to the last three pages later tonite. AngelaSaxxons Bikini Beach 2 might not be my favorite story anymore. I'm almost glad it took so long to finish because my work feels like I'm trying to imitate you when I write and reading the second half of the story might have me feeling like I crossed the line from inspiration to plagiarism. I really love your use of villainous frat guys. My ENF DOT COM series really was pulled from your idea. Before you finished this I was toying with the idea of doing an ENF version of "Shark Week" but was worried Discovery had that trademarked. I'm so glad you finally finished this. Thank you for the great read and inspiration. I just looked to the right and see "Mud Wrestling" in the tags section. I am even more excited for the last three pages than before. I didn't think that was possible.

High praise! Thanks Pugzilla! Hope you like the ending.

I think this is one of the best all-time erotic stories. The ending was very sexy as part of the story. The peak happened earlier though during the live broadcast sharking. I might have built the ending up in my head a little after I saw mud wrestling in the story tags while commenting. In my mind I was thinking some kind of final match pitting two girls against eachother. Maybe the last two girls one of them had legally changed her name from a Z name. Just a crazy sexy story overall though. Both entries were loaded with sexy scenes. Thank you again for the great read.

Thank you for bringing this home. Fantastic. Luckily I only discovered the first half last year but I have to say worth the wait. Incredible tension and twists and turns. The nonerotic elements were every bit as good as the erotic. And lots of gratitude for not just rushing through. Even when you had Joe pull the Quad it was spectacle at its finest. Excellent use of Baxter, the foreshadowing was top notch. Looking forward to more of your submissions.

Very well done. Worth the extended wait. Almost thought it was gonna have an ending like Animal House; Ken became a cameraman for Naked Survival, Chris and Andrew own a skyscraper window washing business, Joe trains TSA agents, Anna moved to Japan to become the top bukkake star, Mandy is currently touring North America in a mud wrestling promotion, Miss Pisces is one of Literoticas favorite web girls, Kerri Zimmerman works for the police going undercover in strip clubs as a featured dancer named Queen Xuxu Zaftig and Baxter went viral and is now the spokesman for Gieco.

Fantastic. Thanks for finishing this story. O how I would like to see that dvd.

I've read it in one go. Both chapters. I didn't see the differents of both chapters.

Well done

Honestly really drug on and got to be so unbelievable that it took me out of it. Everyone knows who's doing the sharking so why not call the police and have them arrested for sexual assault? It would be different if it was a competition between the frat and the sorority but it's just random people so you mean to tell me that one of them isn't filling a report? Hot ending with anna at least.

Hype part 3 Revenge/Bet that backfires

will there be another Sharking Day after the next Nude Secretaries Day ?

If there is a lot of interest for it I may write another. I've been getting mostly requests for more Monica so I think I will do more stories about her,

Monica first then its Sharking Time

I agree with Anonymous first Monica. Kerry can upping the ante with her friends against ATZ lose first but Ultimately Win

Yah a Bet would be great for the next Part or some sort of Challenges where the Girls VS the ATZ Frat Broys to get the Videos and Pics Deleted and for the Frat to Stop the ATZ Tradition but if they Lose they need to Fuck/Bukkake/Gangbang/Ass to Mouth/Be There Frats Sluts.Guy before says it right ATZ should cheat fuck them and then Lose gloriesly.Jennifer Haggerty and Rachel Sutton, Samira Patel, Tiffany Cornell, and Nicole Urbauer,Kit Pisces and Vicky Talbert,Kerry Zimmerman will have there Revenge But at what Cost?I will look after Sharking Day 3 in a Year. PS:Good Stuff DUDE

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hot hot hot

The sexy scene in the and could have been a bit longer

requiem for a dream(2000) ass to ass scene is always what comes to mind when i think about these frat bros

At Anonymous3 months ago

"Yah a Bet would be great for the next Part or some sort of Challenges where the Girls VS the ATZ Frat Broys to get the Videos and Pics Deleted and for the Frat to Stop the ATZ Tradition but if they Lose they need to Fuck/Bukkake/Gangbang/Ass to Mouth/°

they should make a hot/degreding striptease including bent over/spreadin while being filmed the whole time before they get Dicked in all holes.

Hot hot hot

Well I think the end with Kerry could have been a bit more discribing how she looks and how she feels Anna's sex scene was also a bit quick but I would be happy if there where a part 3

A read the comments they say challenges but what challenges would the frat boys accept? Something lewd, sharking, sex?

IT would make more sense if they accepted only for the Woman to help them shark the new girls for ATZ where if the frat wins they got to fuck Kerry and Co and get all new ATZ pics/videos and if they lose they still have made one last ATZ. It could be a challenge who can shark more the frat or Kerry/Co. It could also be that the frat give them extra points if they do some sexy/humiliating acts and I agree that the frat should lose but cheat.

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Well there could also be a prequel how the tradition started

Mandy and Anna should get a rematch but not in mud wrestling

I really love the part where they are stripped in front of the cameras for the whole campus to see, only thing it could have more is romance and sex

Yah but the frat wants more not only students but also and the hottest woman in the county for atz masterpiece.Teacher, police woman, actresses,TV hosts, lawyers, all getting sharked and maybe even fucked

They make another bet who can fuck the most chick's film and claim being the atz fuckmaster. Joe wants both atz sharking points atz fucking points

Oral 1 point

Pussy 2 points

Anal 3 points

It has to be always a new girl to count not someone you already fucked and there are additional points for certain woman like Kerry,Mandy, the science teacher, and so on

I like your storys nude secretary day, maybe she will say yes, spank a waitress, boys go naked girls wear swimsuits, and sharking day.Your strength is it when you have strong lead characters and a naritive plot that builds them up build the relationship between them and romance humor and raunchy stuff makes sense in a the way that even over the top stuff works for the plot.Maybe a part 3?

Enjoyed it

I think Kerry and Co should get a revenge against ATZ

Good stuff I like enf, stripped naked,naked infront of camera, and nude in public.

Nsd is over now is time for atz 👍

I have read the new NUDE SECRETARIES DAY maybe Tess and TV Crew could come to Campus during Traditon.

Sharking day part 3?

I would like to read about Kerry Zimmermann again

go Totzman 🍻

Or maybe a sequel to girls wear swimsuits,boys go nude but now no one wears swimsuits

Well regardless I love the exposure in your story

Hope you had great hollydays

This happening to teachers would be so hot

At Totzman:Could there be a next part or is it completely over?

I don't have any plans for another part right now. I'd have to think of a good idea for one and I have other projects I'm working on right now.

Ok

at Totzman: sad but understandable

At Totzman: would you be fine if another author would continue it?

Anonymous: yes, I'm okay with that. I'd be interested to see what directions readers would want to take the story. Free free to take a stab at it.

At Totzman i want to make sharking days 3 :)