All Comments on 'Shaving'

Wow, this had all the elements of a great erotic story. Well written, good story, good characters, titillating. Your writing told the story, it did not insert itself. I was free to lose myself in the tale, and experience all the delight of this erotic tease, and its great ending. Well done and HOT!!

Wow, great job! This is one hot couple. Great job telling the tale. Good build up, great ending. You know how to draw the reader in! Your writing was sharp, and focused. It kept me engaged. The woman you write for is lucky indeed. Hope that we hear more from you soon! Taking a shower and shaving will take on a new meaning from now on... smiles

Fun, sexy, full of tension- nice job.