All Comments on 'She Came Back'

Good one!

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This is in the wrong category. It is not a romance, it is an erotic encounter with a couple of cheaters.

Why is this in Romance? There's no romance, just sex and lust. Should be in Erotic Couplings.

Ten years ago he was coaching this 12-year-old girl at basketball. Now it's instant love after one date, with a 40-year age gap. Doesn't ring true.

Good one but FTDS

This story needs a more extensive introduction and build-up, especially for a Romance story. The sex scene is very romantic, and justifies the categorization of the story in the Romance genre, but it is far too short and seems rather rushed.