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Click hereIt was too much stimulation, leaving her lightheaded with desire and aching with need, but she couldn't ask him to stop, didn't want to ruin the rhythm that had her on the edge. She sucked in a breath as the pain gave way to a pleasure she'd never experienced. Teeth clenched, she shuddered beneath him, her body pulsing around his fingers as she groaned his name, and then the darkness took her under.
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PhoenixOfLoveover 1 year agoAuthorVery valid points, MediocreAuthor! Thank you! I didn't consider how Riley could be a confusing name. Years ago, I read a book where Justice was the main character and fell in love with the name. I'll keep your comments in mind when I write future stories. Much appreciated. Merry Christmas!
MediocreAuthorover 1 year agoI'm not gonna lie, the preface left me super confused.
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"Riley killed his brother, or so it's claimed. But Justice knows the truth, that she's an undercover cop in a women's rehabilitation facility, and that his brother is very much alive."
I thought Riley was a guy. I know men named Riley, so I thought Riley killed his (own) brother.
Justice is an unusual name (in my experience) for either a girl or a guy, so I figured Justice must be the girl. So I thought Justice knows the truth that she (herself) is an undercover cop.
I eventually figured it out, and I liked the overall premise, but that opening threw me for an absolute loop.
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I know as an author, it's super annoying to post a new story and have readers immediately jump on all your small spelling or grammar mistakes (I once had a reader say he'd never read my stories, because I mistook "shutter" for "shudder). But I was seriously lost.
Either way, if you continue this story, I'd like to read it. (Now that I know who's who, lol)
