All Comments on 'She Couldn't Stop Epilogue'

You ended a tale that started with lies and betrayal with all parties headed towards heartbreak but ended it with love for the three. Thank you. 5*

it was just a dud ending

What a stinking pile of excrement. This was a pointless chapter that wasn’t erotic in the slightest.

What an unexpected good ending, Stephan complété win and David nowhere to be see

What an absolute crock of shit.

I did not find an interesting story here, just sex although the author did wish to convey a loving family. Not a true story in getting you from one point to another.

This is the best ending I could have possibly imagined for this story. Got to admit I was not a fan of the first few chapters, but I am one now. Great writing!

I enjoyed this chapter. Nice way to finish the story

5stars

This sounds like an idealists veiw of polymorphic loving. Rarely does a threesome like this work in real life. But as a group sex romance hallmark story it ended okay as a fictionalised version of a story.

This is an amazing story about a woman's journey to find her identity. The emotional turmoil's she navigates between the steadfast wife she has become and the sexual woman she is growing to know is raw and very detailed, effortlessly keeping me engaged with Claudia's mental state and racing thoughts. It is less about a cheating wife and more about her balancing the unalienable truths she continues to discover about herself.

Smearing the line between conservative marriage and progressive sexuality, it is easy to see the weighty conflict she engages in when dealing with her growing discomfort of being caught between them. Yet steadfastly she holds to the middle, the desperate reconciliation she seeks with the two parts of her needs becoming not only the dramatic web she ensnares herself with but also the deep-rooted twine that holds her together.

The story is forgiving, bold, understanding, and scathing; a tender raking of nerves and fiery consequences that seeks to reach the bedrock of what identity, companionship, and sexuality mean to one woman and those she surrounds herself with.

Thank you for this story :) I hope to read many more from you.

1 star - not my kind of story.

Like everyone else, I liked how things wrapped up. I don't think it was worth going through the heartache, possible diseases and pregnancy threat, but it worked out.

This is an amazing story. It really shows how powerful and passionate love can be, and it's inspiring to see a man like Stephan who is brave enough to make a commitment to two women he loves. The details are wonderfully written and it really brought out the emotions of the characters

Well Stephan did say he wanted to have a family lol hope he can handle 4 children now

This story is unbelievable. It can not be believed. It falls outside the realm of realism. Suddenly, David is out. Stephan the cuckroach is in. Emily and Claudia are best mates and happily pregnant. Stephan is without doubt one of the worst characters I've read of, outclassed only by Emily, David, and Claudia. So the whole series is just so much trash.

This is the first story in this series that reached 4 stars people seem to like stephan being the home wrecker rather than claudia

Just found this hidden gem of a story. Don't get fulled by the rating or the comments the writing is top notch. Highly recommend.

A good story well written and told. Most of the ones complaining about you style and subject matter don't seem to understand this lifestyle and probably don't have a sex life of there own and use that complaint as a default when there is nothing else to complain about. They will usually mix in accusations of being a cuck as well. Makes 'them feel intelligent and included in the in-crowd. Keep it up. Seems like you have something to say. Thank you for your effort.

Comments Are Way Off

The ONE thing you cannot say is that Stephan ended up a Wimp or cuck. No way in Hell. As to whether or not you write a sequel on David...that is up to you. I don't think one is necessary. But that doesn't mean I wouldn't read it if you submitted it. I personally enjoy stories where the wife is a secret slut deep down. And gets a trial from getting pregnant outside her marriage. I personally find that idea very erotic. After overhearing my own mother tell my wife she was tired of me holding off starting a family and giving her grandchildren that she would not blame my wife if she got pregnant by another man. I was doubly shocked to find out my wife was already considering that and had even picked out who it might be. If she does, indeed, get pregnant by that bastard, I will divorce her as fast as the paperwork can be typed. But outside of real life in fantasy I don't find anything wrong whit this types of stories.

Thought-Provoking and Well-Written, Despite Personal Reservations

I recently completed this series and while I must admit that the subject matter isn't typically my cup of tea, especially all the cheating and adultery, I was genuinely surprised by the quality of the writing and the overall storytelling.

The narrative explores complex relationships and desires, which, at times, can be challenging to digest. But what really kept me engaged was the author's skill in creating rich, multidimensional characters who felt entirely real. The emotional depth and character development were exceptional.

The writing was engaging and well-crafted, which speaks volumes about the author's writing prowess. Despite my personal reservations about the storyline, I couldn't help but be drawn into the world they created. The pacing was spot on, and the plot kept me intrigued until the very end.

While the subject matter might not be everyone's cup of tea, I believe that this story is an excellent example of how talented storytelling can breathe life into even the most challenging of narratives. It's a story that challenges societal norms, explores the complexities of human relationships, and keeps you thinking long after you've finished it.

I might not have expected to enjoy it, but I did. Kudos to the author for their remarkable storytelling ability, even when handling a topic that might not be for everyone.

Rating: ★★★★☆

I stumbled upon this story, and I have to say, I had a completely different experience than many of the other people that commented. While I agree that the writing is technically sound, I just can't get past the story's core theme of infidelity.

No matter how well-crafted the characters and plot are, the fact remains that the central characters are engaged in dishonest and hurtful acts. As someone who can't stand cheaters in real life, I found it difficult to empathize or connect with these characters, no matter how well the author portrayed their internal struggles and desires.

The issue isn't the quality of the writing; it's the topic itself. I couldn't help but feel a strong sense of moral discomfort throughout the story. While it's essential to explore diverse and challenging themes in literature, this particular story didn't resonate with me due to its portrayal of cheating and its impact on the characters involved.

In the end, it comes down to personal preferences. While some readers may appreciate the writing and storytelling, I found myself too distracted by the cheating theme to fully enjoy this story. It's well-written, but the story didn't sit well with me.

2 stars at best.

Wow just read all 10 stories of this tale and have to say I loved it all highly recommend.

WOW! Amazing ending! 5 STARS

Such an Amazing Story. Truly deserves the highest praise. Love a happy ending.

Nope. Not a hotwife but a cheating slut and he should be checking the DNA before he goes forward. Poly relationships never work for long.