All Comments on 'She Gets Taken From Another Master'

Loved it, such a good writer! Can you please write a second chapter to it? Thank you!!!!

The story itself had some nice elements to it but to be perfectly honest with you I could barely get into it just because of the fact that you were switching tenses so much and you were switching from first person to third person so many times. You need to review this again and really figure out what perspective you want to tell it from.