by VoiceFantasies2cumby
Weak blackmail and so predictable. People don't just stand there letting an uninvited guest take pictures, they find something to use as a weapon and use it. He's trespassing.
WHY do people ALWAYS forget that most of these stories are fiction? Enjoy it, or move on to something else. I liked it!
OF course NO one is going to the door, without being covered up, except in fiction, it's still fun.
Thanks for the critique "Anonymous". Unfortunately to lay out the background story that leads up to Jimmy putting up with Ronnie being so aggressive and domineering in the story would have required the story to be overly long in the build-up to any sexual action. It's a balancing feat for sure in writing stories designed to help a person jack off, perhaps in subsequent chapters that can be explained or storied more thoroughly.