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AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

"The years past. I continued to call on her dad for business"

"The years PASSED. I continued to call on her dad for business"!

muskyboymuskyboy11 months ago

Good story, shitty ending.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

what an asshole. and a cum dumpster, 'happy' or not in her faux marriage. nothing to like about this one. nada.

enseignerenseigner11 months ago

You are a good writer, but I wish you'd proofread. Once paragraph is repeated twice, the females name changes to Cindy and then back to Deb. One quick proofread would catch these. Not sure the tears and falling in love was necessary at the end. Otherwise a great story.

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