All Comments on 'She Wolf Ch. 01'

Please do something about your spelling: waste, not waist, as an example. Very, very off putting.

It could be good, but currently it's just a bit more than cliche. I'll read the next chapter before I form a strong opinion. The spelling issues were distracting, but I could get past it. Try hooking up with an editor.

Yes, I agree with the others, to be careful with your spelling. But besides that point, I think you're onto something good. I see this story having great potential. Please do not give up. I really do hope you post some more chapter(s).

Your story has promise, but as the others say, the spelling and grammar are a little off-putting. As has been suggested, get yourself an editor who can help you out. I also find that it helps if you write a piece and leave it for a couple of days. Then go back to it, re-read it and make corrections to the story line. I find sooo many errors that way and my writing usually makes a lot more sense once I've done that! Good luck with your writing!

I like the build up. I can't wait for the next chapter.

I like it. Think I'll read more.