All Comments on 'She Wolf Ch. 03'

Good work so far! Love how the story is coming along. I think you need to work on the spelling - an editor could help you catch a lot of those problems that would slip past a spellchecker.

Apart from that, the story is hot!

Your doing a great job so far and i know that this is going to be one story that i hope will go on and on. So many dont follow a story board so that it can be on going but your doing well.

cant wait for more!! please hurry

Such a good story being formed!! I cant wait for the next chapter.

But you need an editor on this chapter. Keep going though. Aside from that its a fantastic story

I hope you continue this story, I think it has a lot of potential. There are a lot of spelling errors that you still need to watch out for, and I suggest you get someone to proofread it for you before submitting it. But overall, great job. Your female character is easy to relate to, but please flesh out your hero a bit more, and maybe add more details about their world. :D - LG

can really tell the difference... loving your story!

I love the wolf stories and this one has potential, but it would be much better if you developed the characters a bit more, made them seem more real. The dialog is very stilted too. If you take your time and flesh out the chapters a bit more I'm sure the story will fly.

Am starting 2 like the wee series better length this chapter