All Comments on 'She Wolf Ch. 05'

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vlawvlawover 14 years ago
Loving it so far!!!

Looking forward to next chapter!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
PLEASE!!!

PLEASE DO NOT LEAVE US HANGING. I CAN NOT BELIEVE HE DID THAT. I HOPE TO HELL SHE GETS HER REVENGE!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
MORE!

Give us more!Give us more!Please quickly!

erin1955erin1955over 14 years ago
Bastard

My heart broke as well.why the fuck did he do that for,unless he was drugged.but cant be cos he was sweaty.plus she's the main girl he fucks.wot really gets me is he'll say sorry,she'll forgive.happy ending.hate that.wheres the baseball bat !!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
oh shit!!

i can't believe he did that and then evenas he was caught, didn't say a word to try and defend himself or anything; what a jackass-alpha! i would've pulled that bitch off his cock and slit her throat, let the bitch bleed all over his shit and be like "ya wanna fuck her now?".can't wait to see how he trys to explain this crap! i don't understand how they can be connected mentally and not feel the other persons emotions to tell where the other mate is at and how they feel in a situation[??] but it's an interesting twist that after he trys to convince her that he truely loves her, he fucks it up.can't wait to read the next chapter and see what he was thinking[ass-hole!] lol. loving the story!! keep them coming! :]

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
What are you doing?

He was such a nice guy? Is he being drugged or something, if you want to make such a dramatic change please give a tip of what the is going on. And please don't keep us waiting I still love the story just not to pleased with the turn of events.

ladylanaladylanaover 14 years ago
Tut tut!

Seems to me Fareon has some explaining to do! Well done as always.Can't wait to see the next chapter up. Lana

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spearman1spearman1over 14 years ago
WTF?

No Freakin' Way!!!!! Faeron screwing the other chick!!?? Kill'em Nikita!! Kill'em both!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
lost interest

Your story started off with such promise...now, I'm not interested...

IndianChocolateIndianChocolateover 14 years ago
Whoa!!!

I can't believe he did that to her. Especially after he found out about her past. Such an asshole move on his part!!! Hope the next chapter isn't too far away.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
don't give up on fareon...

there has to be a good explanation for what happened; why she couldn't here him calling for her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Plzz make the next chapter soon!!! Can't wait!

Man I can't belive him. I mean he was all like "I love you Nikita. Don't ever try to leave me! I would never hurt you babe". Ok so having sex with the blonde bitch was what him trying to making her feel good??. I'm starting to think that what Fareon said to Nikita about not ever mating anyone but her was a lie.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
oh my god

soo did not see that coming cant believe it didnt think he would do that, i can feel a bitch fight coming on though!she needs to stand up to the alpha and demand the respect!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
More!!!

You are a goddess!! I cant wait for your next chapter!!! Do not stop!!! PLEASE!!!

Alotta_FunAlotta_Funover 14 years ago
I feel sick

I can't believe Fareon would do that after all his protests about loving her. Digusting. No apologies make up for that kind of betrayal.

RainezDemisexDRainezDemisexDover 14 years ago
i agree =[

he def betrayed her. i cant wait to read more. hopefully that other btch gets her throat ripped to shreds =D

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

THERE NEEDS TO BE MORE AND SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SHE NEED TO KILL THE BITCH AND FIND OUT WHY DID HE DO THAT.

NS11NS11over 14 years ago
Odd

I'm not sure where the story is going, but I found it odd that he would sleep with someone else. Especially since she is his mate. He's supposed to protect, nurture, and have a hard time being away from her at all. I'll wait for an update...it just seems a little odd.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
it takes 2

i cant belv he did that u can never forgiv sumone for that..an if sumones throut is getin ripd out it shud be his cos she wasnt the only one he is her mate he shud know beta..i think she shud end up wit the guard

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
omg

Wher is it wher is it wher is it

sunshinesdevotionsunshinesdevotionover 14 years ago
nasty twist!

What an asshole! I agree you can never make up for that kind of betrayal!! Nothing ever makes that better!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
good story

want the story to keep going, please give a good ending ---- but make it really good and juciy.... I hope the ass hole gets what is coming --- both of them.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Ummm next story?!

I have been coming back again and again and i was wondering when you would have the next chapter up? This is a good story and i'm really interested!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Aw!! Man!

Gosh ... You can sure as hell write!!! I cannot wait for the next chapter!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
!!!

Loveeeeeeeeee ittttttttt!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
wow

Made me sick to see her twisted sometimes it isn't that hard to be mated.everyone on this site makes it so hard:(

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Sex with another Woman

The Alpha is a grade A jerk. He declares his love for her then just bangs another chick?! Something doesn’t add up. He took her virginity and just jumps into bed with another?! What happened to being mates? Did that nasty woman cast a spell on him?mm

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