by wifelvrman
The story was good but not for the Loving Wives category. Continue the storyline in NonConsent/Reluctance.
There are shitasses asshole no count moutherfuckers like the peice of shit at the car lot. Oh yeah i wish I had him in front of me and my baseball bat. God would I wiork his ass over and then I'd shove the bat up him real far.
this way. Angie is a dumb ass redneck wife and the kids are probably as retarded at the woman and the writer. He is an asshole, he is really the car man. Then dumb redneck woman doesn't realize that there are laws to protect people from this kind of sexual predators. She could take a cheap tape recorder in and get the man on tape telling her that unless he fucks her then he will take the car away. This is rape and she would have more money that she could shake a stick at. She would own the car lot. But she is just too dumb ass so the peice of shit writer can write a bad fuck stroke story. The dumb ass writer knows this yet still write (regurgitates) a story like this.He should be shot.
I agree with the others. I really enjoyed this story. More chapters should follow.
excellent story, excellent work, can't wait to see the next chapter with her and this loan shark
I was much more critical of one of your other stories. I said it was too rushed and covered too much ground.
This story adds the parts i think you left out of the other.
It is a much better job.
You can't write a decent character or story to save your life!
No stars as even giving this garbage one star would be an insult to the star.
Get over it you shallow minded twits, it's just a story. Don't like it, don't read it.
You get over you loud mouth POS. Read the stupid story and skip the comments if you can't handle them. You guardians of the garbage make me sick.