All Comments on 'Shelby's Distress'

Intriguing and highly erotic. The reference to “goons” holding Shelby down, etc, seemed out of place/distracting/unnecessary, otherwise the movement from non-consensual to consensual was key element to storyline for me. Would like to see where you might take this relationship with some reference to how Shelby met Nancy while you develop both characters. Keep sharing.

Amazing, loved it. Strong disagree with the previous comment - the goons holding but not participating is very up my street. and I'd love to hear more about that, or any other girls that Nancy has played with

Thank, anonymous - like I wrote it’s part of a larger story that’s still in my brain. The goons appear from time to time and one even had an offshoot story I started but have never finished. As I write I’ll see how much they figure in.