by sexy_mama_09
This story was amazing, ignore what others said about it cause I loved it !! :P
Reads as light hearted incest/fetish story, fast paced.Does what it says on the tin!
...it wasn't so rushed and a little more thought was put into it. You had really good idea but you need to take your time, reread it, pay attention to the flow of the story, and edit when necessary.
Again, really hot idea, almost cum worthy just avoid "Peter Griffin's Laws of Erotica" and you'll do fine next time. ;)
Mr. Anonymous... Where is your story? Nobody forced you to read this very entertaining story.