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All Comments on 'Shimmerings: Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Interesting start! Hopefully we'll see more soon.

Master_DoctorMaster_Doctor12 months ago

interesting, but disappointingly short.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

There is some potential here, but bad word choices (like "accident language"), rushed ending, and lack of details to explain several things make this less than a complete chapter.

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I'm Hugo, I usually write about a male dominant and different ways of control in the mind control category.