All Comments on 'Shireen's Story: Continuation'

Nadia the way that u took the story forward n created the whole drama!!!! i dont have words for it! u do magic with ur words creating the charaters and different scenario settings. n yeah ur My Biography! u know what? that was the point after which i started visiting literotica often n used to visit ur profile to check for any updates. Keep it up n m looking forward for the continuation of this story as well My Biography!

This is terrible. You took a well written story and added a totally trashy sequel. The writing is real bad, the premise forced and the situations completely silly. Try something original and do not try to mimic better writers if you do not have the obvious ability.