All Comments on 'Shireen's Story: From Her Viewpoint'

Great to see a story told from two viewpoints. This fills in a lot of blanks the earlier submission left. Well done.

need a sequel in view of her views

"Henceforth he would have to earn his favours in competition with any lovers I may have or select in future. I knew I still loved him, but felt that he had pushed things over the edge and that it was time to correct the wrongs. Certainly the road ahead would be rocky and testing, but he had to atone for what I had been put through. The first day of the rest of our sexual life was beginning just then!"

I agree with the first commenter. Shireen's story deserves to be continued. Would love to see Akbar competing with Hernan and Kerri for Shireen's affections.

It is almost same word to word as previous version