All Comments on 'Shona Pt. 10: Charlotte & Champagne'

Much packed into this last chapter, but flowed easily, even poignantly at times — not painful or sad, rather deeply affecting/evocative — and sex that revealed story and characters. The closing “time stamps” felt good/brought satisfying closure to this romance (and it was so much so from those Aly’s first “treatment” moments). Felt like you’re going to miss this crew of characters. Really enjoy the characters and their journeys you create in all your work. Now I just need to find a “moisture resistant laptop”. Thanks for sharing your imagination.

What a nice, gentle landing for a wonderful series. I really enjoyed the cast of characters and their evolving stories. Oh, and the HOT sex! Hearing how things ended up for everyone was just lovely.

Migbird: Thanks. You are right about the characters. Whenever I write a story, the characters kind of take on a life. I always miss them for a week or two after the story is finished, and muse on them for a long time after that.

Lissy

toesucker1: Thanks. Glad you enjoyed the ending. I must admit I found it difficult to decide how to bring it to a close. I wanted there to be closure, but it was a story that could have gone on and on.

Lissy

I really enjoyed this series Lissy and definitely looking forward to more of your work. Thank you

JacquiUK41: Thanks for commenting, and you're welcome. There will be more... 🙂

Have to sat that I'm very sad that this series has now finished. It was fun, sexy and erotic. And I've come to the conclusion that my favourite character was Viv!!

Thank you Lissy and look forward to more stories from you. Now, go and take a rest!!! 😊

CupidCupid: Thanks. I'm a little sad too. These were a fun bunch of characters. Interesting that you picked out Viv. 🤔

No rest for the wicked though. Penny has me working on part 6 of her story as we speak!

Lissy

I really enjoyed this series. Fun, sexy and thoughtful

LeggieLibby: Thank you. Glad you liked it.

Lissy

Kind of a mild ending I think. Maybe Shona and Aly would get married? Intro to parents and family? Great story though, I really, really enjoyed it. Thank you.