All Comments on 'Shore House With Sis'

Oh cliffhanger! Not nice at all. More please. gotta know if they hook up.

Looking forward to the next chapter!

"To continue and finish."

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No chapter # in the title to warn this wasn't a complete story BEFORE opening it always earns an automatic rating of 1.

I had to paused briefly to give the author a rating of 5 (FIVE), that is after reading paragraph two. "the dark black V-shaped bush of long pubic hair." With that said, I am now going to return to the story and read about a mature sounding adult female (over 18) who does not have a razor burnt mound or disgusting / irritating stubble growing all over a mound. Good job, NO, EXCELLENT JOB ON YOUR FIRST STORY, and again I am ONLY at paragraph two. \I am greatly looking forward to the rest of your story.

I love how this story starts out. I remember walking in on my mom in the shower and seeing her perky upturned tits that were super nice for a 41-year-old. Seeing her gigantic jet-black "mom bush" that was prominently accentuated by her dark tan and the white soap suds running down her flat abdomen into her bush as she was rinsing shampoo from her hair. With her head leaned back and her eyes closed, mom unknowingly allowed me a prolonged look at that thick dark mound while I quietly eased back out the door. Then, I watched her finish rinsing and towel off from the hall before rushing down the hall to my room. The image of her perfect tits and OMG, that sexy thick black bush that was begging to be combed after she toweled it dry, will forever stay burned into my mind. Sometimes, no, a lot of times, when I am fucking or eating my wife, my mind will reflect back to those sexy upturned tits and that beautiful hairy pussy. Mom's pussy looked so much hairier than my wife's pussy, dark brown instead of jet black. I

can't help but wonder what was hiding under that thick mound. My wife has thick cunt lips and a huge clit, larger than her nipples and it gets hard like a cock, that I love to gently suck on and rhythmically jack off with my lips as I suck it, ever so easily. I often wonder, does mom have a big clit, does it get erect, are her cunt lips thick, and does her pussy grip tightly. I get hard thinking about it and wondering if mom squirts during her orgasm like my wife's pussy sometimes does. Sometimes, I get really deviant, and I have thoughts about my wife's mom's pussy and tits. Sometimes I wonder about my sister's pussy. The hair on my sister's head and forearms is the same color as mom's. I suspect her pussy hair is the same color as well and my sister's pussy hair probably just as thick as moms. Anyway, a great first story and I look forward the reading the rest of it.

Sorry for the cliffhanger. This is my first story and I’m new to this but I do feel bad. 💔

Please, never publish an incomplete story.

I don't believe your apology is sincere. It sounds sarcastic. That combined with the fact that there is a 24 hour wait time for publishing a story, along with the fact that you knew about the cliff and decided to publish the story anyway makes me think that you're just a cuck. There's nothing wrong with being a cuck, but you aren't posting to the right genre if that's who you want your demographic to be. 1 star

Don't worry about the cliffhanger. It's not that big of a deal. It's a good story so far. I'm looking forward to reading more.

I completely enjoyed your story. It is almost on par with my favorite author, Silk Stockings Lover. In other words, keep them coming.

This was difficult to read. Is English a 2nd language to you? There was so much wrong with the wording that it was hard to follow. For instance, no one has 2 groins. I think you meant to say thighs. There were other places where I couldn't quite figure out what you were trying to say. The cliffhanger was not a problem, although I would have liked to know that there was more to come before starting, but the difficulty of figuring out what you were trying to say was very off putting. 2 stars at most.

This was very good, didn't even realize this was your first story until after I finished it. Don't pay too much attention to the over the top angry comments. Obviously do try and improve and add chapter # in the titles and proofread your stories. But most of the negativity is way more than necessary. I really hope you write chapter two to this as I've been looking forward to it since it came out. That's actually why I decided to comment right now, as there still isn't a chapter two so I hope you'll release part two sometime soon.