All Comments on 'Shotgirl Summer My Ass!'

by Aspire523

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Loved the story!

Cudos for your handling of mild ED. It happens to guys all the time, and it rarely gets put into a proper light. It's really not a big deal, and is usually nerves (not weakness or over masturbation). Thanks for normalizing that in your work!

I also really liked how you portrayed role playing. There is a real tender cuteness to how you wrote these characters that came across really well. It's rare to find that mixed with such vivid descriptive sex scenes. Often authors are either all business or all romance on this site. It's a real rare treat to find rich warm characters coupled with vivid and mildly rough (at least the BJ) scenes.

That's enough praise for now. I gotta go read the rest of your stories!

Aspire523Aspire523over 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks so much for the positive strokes. I hope everyone likes it as much as you did!

quadacesquadacesover 2 years ago

Are you planning on continuing this story?

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