All Comments on 'Shower Time'

Such a nice story. I'd like to a bit of a longer story though.

I really hope you'll continue this story.

You could use an editor's help with punctuation and paragraph structure, but you have exciting ideas, terrific pacing, and solid story structure. We need more of that on this site.

Yeah.

Sexual Abuse

Abuse of young women is more widely reported, though some exceptional stories like that of the NH school marm now a guest of honor at Bedford Hills Correctional Facility have made headlines. The assumption is that males can take care of themselves or may welcome the attention.

What I didn't see in this yarn is the reaction of the young man. With a woman in power over him throwing away the towel, what's going on in his mind? Is he lost in conflicting emotions? Is he frightened or pleased, hesitant, or emboldened, retreating or spurred to physical aggression, docile and compliant? ,

Your stories are fun.

Fun to read, and different from others here.

I enjoyed all three and well done.