All Comments on 'Shown Off Ch. 12-14 - End'

For the most part I did enjoy the story but I didn’t finish this chapter. It went too far for my tastes. Probably because it’s too realistic? It makes good old Josh come across as abusive instead of dominant. That said his behaviour is very realistic for a teenage boy so I’m not judging. As pure fantasy the entire thing is exceptionally erotic! Your writing style is great too very easy going.

Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

You really ended it with a bang! Outstanding! I am in awe of your talent and -- apparently -- your past. What state was this small town in? It reminds me of small town Indiana. Your devoted fan, JB Edwards

PS: Five stars, obviously.