All Comments on 'Shrunken State Pt. 01'

Don’t ask…..-

strange- ordinarily i would say you need to get some help, but the story was so weird i read every word and was enamored by it.

don't waste your time reading this trash

Oddly creative. 4

This was fucking stupid and an insult to physics.

IF he had been shrunk, his mass would have remained the same: 250lbs. And concentrated in a 6.5” body. Had she been able to get him in her pussy, he would have suffocated because there would have been ZERO airflow. He would have choked on his own CO2.

You've written three stories and have 3 followers. Find a new hobby, you are terrible at this one.

Weird or what! Score is only Dislike.

What the heck was this mess?

Very creative. The fact that it's ridiculously unrealistic makes it a fun read. Citing physics on a story that's clearly fantasy? Ignore the critics; everyone else does.

This belongs in Sci/Fi. And it onlg had a smidgen of LW.

Que história horrível, nunca li algo tão podre

This one was a real short story that slipped right by me.

good read, but the being in her ass would not work and messed the story up. He would end up ill from being in there for any time!

Wrong category.

Ok, you people watched Honey I Shrunk the Kids and didn't make this much noise. It's a popular suspension of natural laws least construct, get over it.

About the story, the MC had the same adventure to many times. He needs to be hidden there while one of the ladies goes on some other adventure with her lady parts. Maybe he needs to end up a different size. Clothes for GI Joe or Ken should fit him. Maybe shrink the wife or friend and have him go on adventures. Have the 2 ladies have adventures. A lot of room to explore here.

Possibly post in sci Fi to expand audience. LW they are sharing a husband but it doesn't quite fit the formula expected.

I'll read this while you write chapter 2

Loved it. Looking forward to more shrunk antics.

Would be interesting if he got stuck behind his wife Cervix and was stuck there for 9 months.?