All Comments on 'Shutting Down'

You said what you wanted to say, and did so very well. I would have liked a bit more, a firmer sense of closure or what the future holds for these two plus any others. Very well done.

The end can just be a beginning.

Nicely written. All kinds of emotions with the closing of the gym and all, but the sex was very tender and loving and supportive all at once. Well done.

Chapter 2 can’t come quickly enough

The gym part is very well written and we empathize with Adam. The sudden breakings of Rule 1 don't quite fit, and the notion of Carrie offering sex for comfort is not pleasing, although she sounds like a lovable person and a great fuck.