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She looked out the window to see the back entrance to her dorm.
"When's your next shift Soph?"
"Um - Sunday, same time,"
Sunday was two days out, and he really wanted to see the girl sooner. He thought about changing her schedule, but decided to leave it alone. He took a deep breath, and looked at the girl once more, "Okay. Sunday, be ready an hour beforehand and I'll come pick you up. Okay?"
"Yes Sir," Sophie replied a little too quickly. She bit her bottom lip, slightly embarrassed that she called him Sir, instead of his name, but it felt fitting.
Eric didn't seem to mind - in fact - he preferred it.
"Okay, this is goodbye for now then Soph," he said, awkwardly moving his hand from her thigh.
Sophie felt a small pang of sadness, but she nodded anyway gathering her things and exiting the car. Once at the rear entrance door, she turned around and waved in his direction.
"Bye Sir, have a nice rest of your day," she said sweetly.
Eric tried his best to hold back a smile, "You too Sophie."
With that Eric pulled out of the parking lot, thinking about all the ways he would train his new toy; and Sophie walked up the steps to her dorm room smiling at the pleasant feeling of her Sir's cum pooling into her pink panties.
[FIN]
- COMMENTS
Rin_Moon4 months agoThis story was hot, I don't know why you got hate comments on this. You did give them a warning and they decided to read it anyway.
Wh1m6 months agosome people need to chill. hope they dont discourage you writing more, very hot and graphic story, loved the dirty talk a lot. Thanks for posting
StirCrazy19about 1 year agoRace play is one of my kinks. So of course I liked it. I noticed that you mentioned the pet store. Do I get the impression that these two events happened in the same town or city?
Anonymousover 1 year agoI didn't rate it because I'm not sure...or I'm conflicted about it. I'll leave it at that for now.
Anonymousover 1 year agoI'm aXhosa woman from south Africa i get went all the time when i see a white man my 18 year pussy yearn for superior white man or women.i read your story for 2 days the problem is i cum when he say cum N i jus cum all none stop
DomFckrover 1 year agoI've dated several ebony girls but would Love to find a Sophie to train as my slave girl to this older white Dom man
Pecos_P3t3over 1 year agoThis is a fun story. I love the setting and scenario. The sex is hot and the heroine is cute—atypical is a the whole point of this vein of smut and you nailed it with your brief description of Sophie. I would have liked to have seen more lead up. More foreplay to see the shift from employee with rights to submission. Also, in the sex play, I would have liked more build-up. I want to see/hear Sophie's resistance to Eric's dominance. It makes the surrender that much more delicious. Minor points for improvement aside, I rated this four stars and I look forward to reading more. Thanks for posting!
GuyJDalmost 2 years agoDespite the degrading acts and N-word used often, the story is 🔥 HOT. I've written similar stories as well, which often make them more stimulating to read. I hope you're planning a sequel soon. I can think of some ideas for it.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoExcellent story. I guess there were a few snowflakes who were triggered, but there is always someone who is trying to cancel something. Once met an African-American woman who was a Harvard grad and she was definitely into being dominated and S&M.
anggalmost 2 years agoThis was a very enticing story. I liked the descriptors you used; I was able to visualize the room they were in, the sexual positions, the facial expressions. I just wish the sex scene was a little bit longer or if something happened in the car before dropping her off. I would like the idea of him being even more forceful. Please continue with this couple.
And, if it's any consolation, I am also a black female. I don't know much about race play, but I do find the power dynamic between an older white man, and a younger black female erotic. The thought of submitting to an older white man is lowkey a fantasy of mine, and I'm glad I was able to imagine that fantasy here.
Please don't be discouraged by the negative comments here. I will never understand why some white people (and I'm sure the ones making those comments about being disgusted are white) need to feel offended on black people's behalf. Perhaps it's caused by an unconscious sense of guilt about being white, but that's irrelevant. Keep up with the writing, you're doing great!
Initiate_mealmost 2 years agoJudging by the comments, you really touched a few nerves here, haha. Why did people read it if they are extremely sensitive about these things? The warning was very very clear. Maybe they just wanted to feel offended.
Fantasy is fantasy, we're allowed to connect with the weird and darker sides of our minds. I enjoyed the story, I think your dialogue is very good. Maybe a tiny bit more detail in the sex itself could be useful, some of the sex felt a bit generic, but overall great writing.
Anonymousalmost 2 years agoMy god some of these comments are doing too much. The story wasn’t bad. The author warned y’all and y’all are still complaining.
