by prinnavea
Boring like playing children's or teenagers games. You knew what was going to happen.
You gotta watch those "SHY" wives. They're the worst. Guess she wasn't shy after all. The premise and storyline were foolish.
A relatively realistic fantasy. Vacations always seem to reduce inhibitions and beach/water vacations even more--you're already wearing less clothing and more exhibitionistic. The dialogue was fairly well done as well, though it can't help but be a little simplistic since the two couples were new to each other and uncertain what kind of behavior would be acceptable.
So, okay--it was a "bare bones" interaction between the two couples, but given the structure of this story being ONLY a one-night experience too much emotional angst and psychological analysis would have been out of proportion to the challenge they'd made to "just go with it".
As for the game? There are a great number of "adult party games" designed to accomplish the breaking down of inhibitions and get people naked and fucking that are available for purchase just about everywhere. Chill, dude.
Keep writing prinnavia. And thanks for this fantasy.
MLJ
A swap without pre- arrangement wouldn't go well....
3 stars for a nice fantasy but jealousy would fuck it up & not in a good way...