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Click here"Me too," Belle breathed, placing her hand on his chest, feeling his strong heat beating fast.
"Please tell me this is not a one off, Belle, I'll understand if it is, but..."
"That depends on you," she said.
"On me?"
"I'm not sharing you with another girl."
"Victoria? You want me to break up with her?"
"I know it's horrible, but if you want to put this inside me again..." she said, holding his flaccid cock in her hand. "Then you have to break up with Victoria first."
Mark liked Victoria, but Belle was his sister, his blood, and blood is thicker than water, he decided, and so, he broke up with his girlfriend on the phone while Belle was in the shower.
He then joined his sister in shower and pinned her up against the wall, with his cock hard again... and the rest became history.
We are already well aware that this is a Brother/Sister love story. So I still do not understand why authors insist on putting UNREALISTIC dialog into their stories to reinforce the idea with the reader. IT IS NOT NECESSARY! To wit:
Mark gripped her waist. "I'm going to fuck you like you've never been fucked before, little sister."
"Then do it, big brother! What are you waiting for? Fuck me!"
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So I took one point off for that.
Then there is the matter of the ending. You had a really good story going right up until the last two or three closing paragraphs where it kind of just whimpered and died. It was as if you just suddenly gave up and threw down a few sentences to close it out. I took a point off for that as well.
3/5
Definitely a five-star story, nicely paced and enough details to keep my mind and dick engaged in their lust for each other throughout the whole story. Hopefully there's a chapter two in the future.
How about the next part when she sucks the cock and swallows the load real nasty and erotic.
Good premise.
But sex is really rushed.
Needed extensive touchy-feely foreplay/preliminaries.
Needed to progress much slower.
Three stars.
Sexy story of siblings getting together. There could be more to this especially if they keep screwing. More please.