All Comments on 'Sibling Rivalry Pt. 01 Ch. 01'

Good start

Biotch gwana be a biotch

The story would be better if they were ACTUAL siblings and not stepsiblings. Not incest, just taboo, which isn't as good.

Anal Play?? Must have missed it.

A good start

Interesting relationship between step siblings. Maybe Steve should have let her learn a hard lesson, but Steve would have been blamed by his father for not keeping her safe. Looking forward to part 2. Steve also needs to flash a "SARCASM" sign for his sister like Leonard did for Sheldon.

Ok. Your opening remarks suggest you have already written much of this story. I don't understand why your submission is so short. There are not many stories in the incest category that run into multiple chapters. What's your planned release schedule. How long would I need to wait to see if this story is even worth following. First chapter ending is disappointing.

Patience. This was supposed to be one story with five chapters and Literotica made it five stories with one chapter each.

Nicely told tale about . . .

This is all-round work. Story to follow ?

A good start, now lets have the other 75%. And by the way, having read maybe 50 stories in the "incest taboo"

category, why is it that every one has called the siblings "step" brother or "step" sister, thus making it not incest

at all. If the idea of siblings fucking each other offends you then why don't you choose another category.

Ok so I cant Waite to see how you get those two together. with all that hate but Im up for the ride.

Good story. Thank you. Looking forward to the fifth chapter and more? Series page says three stories and I did not see the 4th story linked anywhere. I generally look at the author page and found the fourth page/story. Yes, it would be seem less abrupt if they had published one story with several chapters, but you have built an interesting universe and have a lot of challenges that could be explored. 5 stars