by mikey2much
OK, I just read this chapter and will have to read the first two to catch up, but man this is sad shit. I know it happens a lot and my personal opinion is that drugs will drag this country down for the count eventually. I have a feeling that I will not like this series, but I'm in for better or worse.
I also haven't read this before, but I'm looking forward to the others. This was a great story, the characters feel real, please keep it going.
You're right about Skeeter being an interesting character - and I'll be sure to backtrack her development in your earlier stuff. On the whole your writing is superb. Excellent descriptions of unexpected places and people, above average plot line, and a high level of literacy (good writers are ALWAYS good at the mechanics). But you shine your brightest with character, it seems.
One suggestion: record your inner dialogues as they're read aloud. Do they sound right to you?