by barbarian queen 2
That Michelle becomes an outcast in her community. It seems like the worst sort of violation to use subterfuge to gain access to someone else's submissive and brutalize him.
Otherwise, a very sweet and tender story...loved it!
Will they be forever apart becouse ofa bitch???
Now true felling must win. Mustn it????
Please more more
The emotions played out here are so well described. As one can see from the following comments, people are connecting with this story in a very personal way. It has transcended it's genre and plays mightily with the emotions of those involved in the story, and with the reader.
This story cries out for an epilogue. Please BQ, provide us with closure!
smiles
SN
I've read this story since the beginning and truly hope this is not how it ends. It was somewhat enlightening, but very disappointing.
phooey on those that didn't like it....i did. i know there is one more chapter in you, BQ. it cries out for closure and the "happy ending".
wench
Dear sweet BQ I have read and loved all of your stories, silence has been paricularly hard. I can give no greater acculades than my tears.
Your Friend Happy Male
i dont care what anyone else says..You are good!!! silence is killing me..i need to read more.