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She is soon climbing the mountain again as he moves against her. She meets each of his thrusts, slamming into him, an "oomph" escaping each time her pubic bone meets his. He watches a blush begin at her breasts turning her neck and cheeks pink as she climbs higher and higher. He grinds his hips against her until the muscle contractions begin again and she is falling to the other side of the mountain, this time taking him with her. His explosion is tremendous, hard, with a rhythmical throbbing, as this small woman takes more out of him than he could have ever imagined.
Panting, he lowers himself, kisses her belly, and falls to the side, pulling her into his arms, as his hand goes up and down her back, soothing her. Her mini-orgasmic after shocks shake her. She moves her hand across him as if she is soothing him. He turns his head to kiss her forehead. She raises her face for a real kiss, and then snuggles against him as her breathing calms.
When he can finally breathe, Jack says, "Silla, I'm not going to let you leave me this time."
"I'm going to stay, Jack."
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoThis appears as the first sub in chrono order. Wow. Human sex first order. This had pump. Few english issues and well crafted. Even the final scene is real rather than dream psycho. I Hate the trivialisation of RAPE. But this Brill. Ex studen ed.
Anonymousover 13 years agoI enjoyed this story but was momentarily confused at the sudden break between Jack discovering her and the storm and later. I would suggest putting some sort of a marker when there is a significant scene or time break in your stories ******** or somesuch. Thanks for your contributions! [Gualterio]
Scorpio44about 16 years agoand heart! I was hooked within twenty words and loved it at the end. Wow! Thank you.
Anonymousabout 16 years agoIn the beginning of your story, the plot is loose, unorganized and patchy. You need to learn to develop this part of the story in a coherent fashion so that your skillful erotic writing can become a more vibrant centerpiece. As is, it seems like you were rushing to get to the "good part," which cheapens the whole thing.
