by maxd01
I THINK I HEARD U SAY PART B WAS COMING OUT TOMORROW? LOVING THIS STORY. WHO CARES WHAT THE HATERS THINK. KEEP IT COMING!!!!! LONGER PLEASE.
why can she be pregnant if only mates are supposed to be allowed to have pups? or why can she not be his mate on this world?
"very prodigious" - there is no "very" prodigious - either it's prodigious or it isn't.
Great characters and interaction. Enjoy the vignette. Nice rounding out of the action. please keep writing.Thanks
I just submitted chapter 6b and hopefully it will be up by Wednesday at the latest assuming they don't reject another chapter. Glad everyone is enjoying it and keep up all the comments.
Just so everyone knows at the end of the next chapter I answered some questions from some of the comments. I updated the list of characters as well.
I loved how Angie too her mate! He was hers and nothing was going to stop her. Now Mari is pregnant with Dan's pups and poor Dan is torn... but he's a good man (and wolf) and he will do what is right.
I did enjoy how Angie met her mate. It just seemed so right for it to happen that way. This is going to be edited as well for a bit more detail.
The joys of smelling your mate! Let me count the ways...
1. No need for deordorant or aftershave or perfume...unless you wanted to hide. A little dab of Old Spice and Angie's tearing the place apart trying to find Aiden! On the plus side, you don't need body sprays because your mate loves your smell.
2. Nice to get a whiff and then when you know thats your mate you don't have to worry about picking the wrong one! The divorce rate among werewolves must be at an all time...uhm...never? I mean, can you imagine a werewolf trying to divorce it's mate? That would be one for the history books! Not to mention it would probably start a war if whoever was stupid enough to cheat on their mate....<shiver> Yep...badness all around.
Liked this one, especially the airborn Angie doing a Kung Fu highwire attack into Aiden's chest! Nice touch!
Sincerely, Payenbrant
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