All Comments on 'Silver Tongued Devil Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

It was a good story, the only problem is how pragmatic and greedy the main protagonist is,

Really?

1. He's not allowed to sexually service his wife.

2. He's not allowed to kiss his wife

3. He's not allowed to ejaculate on here (that one's mild so I won't make a big deal outta it)

4. He didn't really give a shit that his penis could've been severely and even permanently damage.

Still good story though.

-Gotcha

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

When are we going to get ch.02? I'm really looking forward to it!

RCPeterGabrielRCPeterGabrielover 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks, everyone for your feedback. Your enjoyment is the very air I breathe. I have been working on several projects and chapter two of Silver Tongued Devil is one of them. I expect to post it for administrative review before the end of Nov 2022.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Can't wait for ch.02!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nicely done.

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