All Comments on 'Simple, Straight and Just Love'

Love it but you never explained why she denied him in the first place. Seems some back story was needed here. And then why was she teasing him, I would have thought she would have loved making love to her husband. Troubling, seems she might want another. You never said. So we have to assume that she's either cheating on him or their relationship is different from normal ones.

Needs editing or at least a beta reader, too many missing words.

Just a little bizarre!

Thank you for yout input. I intended to write a story about controlled orgasm implying more pleasure. However, having a little back story and setting up their characters is essential for these stories. I will remember these in the future.

Thank you :) cheers!!!

A femdom tale in progress going toward the usual fetish-cuck theme ? No good.

I agree with stillaonewomanm that there is too much unexplained backstory.

So, the biggest issue with this story is you set it up like a typical Loving Wives story while (apparently) trying to write a loving wife story, leaving fans of both types of stories disappointed.

Not enough missing words.