All Comments on 'Sin and Desire'

I enjoyed this, and I wouldn’t be disappointed in a follow up with Jack and Ashley as he properly enjoys her.

Another awesome story. This really needs a follow-up that covers the next day and how Ashley's outlook changes.

Will there be a follow up?

As always, spectacular story. I came twice before I was able to finish it. My absolute favorite type of story. Thank you for sharing it with us.

How Ashley goes from nonconsent to reluctant is fun to read. As is the father watching his daughter getting fucked for her first time.

However, Ashley's speech about abstinence a few hours earlier should have given the father, Richard, a clue about how she had not given her consent, feel do I. There are other motivations to achieve the same result that make more reasonable sense.

It may be nice if in a next chapter, a character defect of Jack's is overcome instead of continuing to focus on Ashley, think do I.

I don't think the writing is particularly good, but ... I'm going to have to cal it a favorite - the suspension of disbelief required is enormous - but so it is in erotica

I think Jack should have said he'd take her to a pharmacy when they got home and get her the morning after pill - that would have relaxed her some

More please.

Let there be a part 2

This was a great story! Please continue this. Maybe Jack taking control of her and turning her into the crazed slut he desires. Maybe he can share her or get the father involved. Great story! Made me very horny!

It must've been something for the dad to hear his daughter moaning in delight to Jack's nonchristian penis thrusting deep into her pussy.

Richard saw her so willingly give Jack her virginity, her Christian innocence.

I wonder if Richard, when hearing Jack drive deep into her innocent pussy, visualized his "pure" and "chaste" daughter so willingly taking his cock and enjoying every push he made into the depths of her Christian innocence.

Maybe her heard his daughter say "Fuck me !!!" as he heard more "bedroom noise..."

Perhaps Richard peered into the crack in the bedroom doorway and saw her climb on top of him and holding Jack tight as she welcomed his penis pushing deep into her and giving her all those sensations she had long denied herself.

Maybe he heard Jack tell her he was cumming and saw his daughter wickedly shake her booty to his powerful thrusts..... and saw her kiss and hold him even more closely as she felt his spermy godless nonChristian cum explode deep into her sweet pussy, which was now all his...

All the words I would muster can be distilled into one: Perfect. I love your stories: the domination, the silent surrender, the cuckold father, the impregnation. Perfect.

Part 2!!!!! There has to be a part 2!!!!!!!

You have great storytelling! This one is certainly one of the best stories so far!

You might be the best author on this site

Best author on this site, I'm constantly checking your page to see if you have a new story.

This was great and I hope you continue it someday.

Can you pretty pretty please have another part to the story. Is her dad going to join or continue to watch? You’re one of the best authors in this website.

Is there a part two ?

Does it continue ?? Does dad join in ?? Does she get pregnant

5 STARS!!! You so gonna have to write a part two, OUTSTANDING storytelling. Thank you for a talented imagination.

Nice, but if she's supposed to be a "good Catholic girl" then she wouldn't even think about asking him to use a condom. Catholics are against every form of contraception.

@2p1k3, yes, a character defect. Perhaps the writer could show how Jack actually raped her.

Perhaps, as a proper and polite Christian girl, she didn't want to object or say anything, being taught how she should be subservient to her man and do all she could to try to please him...

So she lets him penetrate her and show her all those things she, a virgin woman, needs to know.

She enjoys his passionate thrusts as he takes her virginity and Christian innocence...

EXCELLENT storytelling, BUT it would have made more sense that she was Hairy, I can't see a virgin teenager that had never organised shaving herself. 5 stars!

For me one of the best stories here. I like your pacing and the amount of detail. And what a great fantasy/scene you describe. 5 stars

Wish you could write more stories!

Wow! Amazing story. I absolutely loved it. In my mind, she is younger, more like maybe a high school freshman or sophomore rather than an 18 year old senior. Regardless, it is very hot and if she is younger that makes the story even hotter. I certainly would love to be her father or their new mutual friend. I expect to see this story hit the 4+ star-rating. I gave it a 5.

I’m glad he wasn’t a total buthole to her. Although, her Dad watching was sad bec he didn’t seem to kn what to do (due to cloudiness from alcohol) … it was a good story. The Author did a good job keeping it simple without over doing the characters and what Jack says to the inexperienced teen. 🌹

I wish her dad had joined in and truly corrupt her

I with that guy... it's truly one of the fucking best stories here

5 stars! You write tremendously well, and I'm glad that I have stumbled across your work tonight!

Amazing story. 5 stars.

This is a well-written story, but I did not give it a grade because I just like it's plot. The author has chosen a theme that everyone who considers something to be sinful should just try it and then they'd love it. Based on that everyone should try drugs heroin cocaine cuz they'd like it everyone should become falling down drunk because they'd like it. In this story the father is made out to be a total idiot who gets so drunk that he doesn't know what's real. The daughter is also made out to be an idiot who gets drunk enough that she is incapable of consent but enjoys the unconsented to sex so much that she becomes an insatiable s*** for the rest of the night. There are people who enjoy every sin or vice or societal Miss deed that exists. That doesn't mean the people who consider certain actions to be crimes immoral or vices are idiots, they just simply have different beliefs. The story was not sexy it was simply belittling the beliefs of the girl and her father.

Great story. Loved the fact that he took her right in front of her dad

This needs a part 3

The thought of my father having to watch me being raped into consent and unable to do anything has me wet beyond description.

This is a poorly written story, as most of this genre are, but the plot is good.