by SissyLovesWriting
I think you need an editor. This was promising but the writing was so bad I didn't finish reading it. Keep trying but please get an editor.
Ignore the commenter below, it isn't that bad. It could use some work, but it's not unreadable.
You worked harder on the spelling on this one, than the first two. Keep trying.
If a guy looks like the hottest bitch in town, but doesn't want to be treated like that, these idiots and his roommate couldn't make him react like the character in the story does. So I don't get his struggle with it all, but then goes along. He has female clothes, right? So if he's already a sissy, why the fuss. If he doesn't want to be treated like these assholes are, which I get, lock yourself in your room, tell them you'll call the police and to Fuck off! But, this half struggle is just annoying.
Wonderful Job!
Wonderful story.
Let me know it you'd ever like to see any of your words turned into art :)
Great job. I fought being a sissy too but Daddy won and I am so happy now.