All Comments on 'Sister Assist Brother Pt. 02'

Boring and wooden.

Next part she should teach him how to eat pussy. Enjoying the story, please keep going.

Great !!!! Something involving feet would be great as a story line.

Is this a report disguised as a storytelling? Nothing to enjoy.

It was a pleasant short story, perhaps next time try making your sentences longer or joining two together to make for a more pleasant read.

He should get lessons on pleasing a woman from their mother. Return and take her the heights she has never known. Fall deeply in love and bear his children.

Okay, this time let's address continuity issues...

Unless I missed something in the first installment, Kimber was living at home and her bedroom was adjacent to her brother's. Now she suddenly has her own apartment?

Again, all of the action flew by far too quickly. The single page installments suck. Put more effort into your work. I noticed that you submitted several stories back to back within the past week. You should focus on quality before quantity. 2/5