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After recovering slightly, I picked my little sister up into my arms and carried her to our bedroom. She smiled happily at me as I lay down beside her. Later we made love again. After all, we needed to practice!
A couple weeks later it was our parents' anniversary and Bethany and I took them out for lunch. We had a very pleasant time, and when we returned to their house Dad asked me to come take a look at something in the garage. When we were in the garage, he said, "Is there anything you want to tell me?"
I swallowed and said, "Bethany and I are a couple."
"Any fool with eyes could see that!" He replied with a chuckle. "Are you ....?" he asked, trailing off without finishing the question.
"Yes, we are a couple in every sense." Then I added, "Bethany instigated the relationship, in case you wanted to know."
"Bethany has had a crush on you since she was a little girl. She compared every man she met to you, and they all were found lacking. She has wanted you since forever. Please, just don't hurt her!" He paused, then continued. "Your mother will be disappointed. She has been hoping for grandchildren."
"Actually, we are planning to start a series of genetic testing to determine the risks of our having children. If the risk of problems is very low, we are planning to start a family. If the risks are higher, we may adopt. But either way, I expect that you will be grandparents at some point."
"That would be wonderful! So you really are planning on this being a permanent relationship?"
"Entirely, completely, 100%! Actually, I have ordered an engagement and wedding ring set for her, but she doesn't know it yet! I hope that you can keep it a secret! Maybe we could even have an informal, unofficial ceremony here."
"Can I tell your mother?"
"If you can get her to swear it to secrecy! It won't be for too long, but I do want to surprise her."
"She will keep the secret! I love you, you know. And while it is unconventional, I'm happy for you both!"
The End
- COMMENTS
walksstrongbear8 months agoPretty good so far! I'm enjoying this story line and truly hoping that it will continue with further chapters!
ScottishTexan9 months agoI love a good story that has this same length to it. Unfortunately with this story, it didn't seem to actually go anywhere. It was as if it the characters were caught in an endless loop of traveling for the brother's company and fucking over and over again. Bethany's exhibition on the highway and again at the pizza place didn't seem to fit the character well at all. The premise of her pining for her big brother most of her life would have probably pushed her into a focus on him. That kind of devotion doesn't beget showing off the goods to random strangers.
The ending scene with their father was also poorly written. It felt like it was almost just thrown in as an afterthought. I really liked the parental acceptance but you really did a rush job on it or either it was a lackadaisical effort, one of the two.
One glaring error to note was seen in this line:
"Her thighs were taught and practically vibrating as I teased her clitoris and nipples again and again."
"Taught" relates to "learning". "TAUT" relates to stretching something "tight"
This story has potential, but it needs a massive rewrite. 3/5
Anonymous9 months agoFinally a story where the two siblings stay together, no other people get involved and they live a beautiful life with each other….beautiful. Thank you, thank you, thank you!
