All Comments on 'Sister/Genie Ch. 09'

by Chris6160

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diusfidusdiusfidusalmost 2 years ago

Would love to see something similar where Jaya is experiencing everything Jenny does but she can't pass out

Chris6160Chris6160almost 2 years agoAuthor

@diusfidus - That was a major theme in Chapter 5, which is the first time they did something like that.

ScottishTexanScottishTexanalmost 2 years ago

The story still meanders without any clear direction or resolution. Boring. 3/5 😴

draco352draco352over 1 year ago

have fun with your story....if it wants to meander all over gods creation and most of Texas...let it meander!!

Michael56SmithMichael56Smithover 1 year ago

She asked/wished for a close copy of her genies body, and it comes with load of sexual perks and is stronger and tougher too, ... a better wish than Jaya knew at the time, ... this story is building to something, ... ;-) TTFN

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