All Comments on 'Sister/Genie Ch. 19'

Really enjoy the characters and the journey they have been on. I both dread and eagerly anticipate Jaya's inevitable confession.

I'm not sure how I feel about how close Jenny and Trevor have gotten, but that's a good thing. If there is heartbreak it's that much more tragic.

A small critique, but I wish there was more external stimuli for Jaya to react... She's reactionary, and her internal stimuli is seemingly nearing it's zenith. Nothing is pushing her to confess, unless I missed something. The primary antagonist seems to be Jaya's own reticence, which appears to be waning.

Anyhow, much love for the story. Can't wait for the next installment

Thanks Grayice.

This part of the story is a bit slower; there'll be another shakeup happening soon, so hopefully that will address your critique. Glad you're enjoying the story though!

So, you say that this is a slower part of the story, with sex, and a developing porn empire starting out, and sex, and many characters along with their sex lives to show us, ... yeah real slow, could you take it down a notch? but not the sex, that's spot on, ... Seriously, I think you are doing good, and your story is holding my attention easily, ... I like it, thank you, ... ;-) TTFN