All Comments on 'Sister in Law Lust Plus Wife's Love'

Poorly written.

Nicely done!

2.5*

First problem:

"Her boobs are a little bigger than Jan's thirty one-inches, but not nearly so firm."

Okay, so you obviously have no clue about the fact that CUP SIZE is the actual breast measurement. In your case, 31 inches tells us the circumference of Jan's chest, in other words, the size of her body and not her titties. A girl who has a Chest measurement of 34C should (in theory) have breasts the same size as a girl who is 36C, but her overall body size is smaller. But holding each tit in your hand should reveal no differences in size per se.

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In all honesty, I was bored to tears about midway through this and we hadn't even reached the introduction of Luanne yet. But the point where I totally shut down was when Luanne says, and I'm paraphrasing, "I'll fuck you any time you want but my sister can never be told about us."

Running around behind your spouse's back is totally uncool. Somehow in the opening of the story I had the idea that this story would be about Jan giving him permission to bed her sister thereby cheating on her. I'm so disappointed that this wasn't the case here. You have disabled the voting, so you must have known ahead of time that people would vote low on this story. 1/5