by tonyslittledick
Stories like this are such bullshit. Every husband and wife know their spouses' body, their scent and certainly their sexual ways.
Unimaginative, adolescent writing, and no attention to correct writing all combine to create a total waste of time, energy, and website space.
You should keep this to yourself.
If you want the reader to actually buy into the "mistaken identity" trope, then the following was a really lame effort to pull it off:
"Puzzled, I asked her, "Did Lucy just cut your hair?" She simply replied, "Un uhh."
Yeah, like that was completely believable.
The next problem is the brevity. Unless you're specifically trying to compete in the 750 word project, this wasn't long enough to be interesting.
Which brings me to the final paragraph. 🤔 It's blatantly obvious that you rushed at the finish by the lack of detail and thought put into the ending. After reading this, I can easily see why it rates barely above a 4 at the time that I'm writing this comment. You're only getting 5 star votes from the people who are using this story for something to jerk off to. 1/5
I surr wish my wife's sister would crawl into bed with me. She loves flirting with me, looks like Jennifer Aniston & let's me grab he breast or smack her on the ass A few times.