All Comments on 'Sister In Law takes my Wife's place'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Damn, it's early in the morning, but this made my cock hard.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Stories like this are such bullshit. Every husband and wife know their spouses' body, their scent and certainly their sexual ways.

cageysea9725cageysea9725over 1 year ago

Unimaginative, adolescent writing, and no attention to correct writing all combine to create a total waste of time, energy, and website space.

You should keep this to yourself.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This was short and ended fast...THANK GOD!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Basic nonsense

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I wish there was more taboo content in this section.

juanviejojuanviejoover 1 year ago

NOT WORTH MUCH...LEARN TO WRITE AND COME SEE US AGAIN.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Nice effort, but not really that good.

ScottishTexanScottishTexanover 1 year ago

If you want the reader to actually buy into the "mistaken identity" trope, then the following was a really lame effort to pull it off:

"Puzzled, I asked her, "Did Lucy just cut your hair?" She simply replied, "Un uhh."

Yeah, like that was completely believable.

The next problem is the brevity. Unless you're specifically trying to compete in the 750 word project, this wasn't long enough to be interesting.

Which brings me to the final paragraph. 🤔 It's blatantly obvious that you rushed at the finish by the lack of detail and thought put into the ending. After reading this, I can easily see why it rates barely above a 4 at the time that I'm writing this comment. You're only getting 5 star votes from the people who are using this story for something to jerk off to. 1/5

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

I surr wish my wife's sister would crawl into bed with me. She loves flirting with me, looks like Jennifer Aniston & let's me grab he breast or smack her on the ass A few times.

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