All Comments on 'Sister Sister'

I liked it as a first chapter , I'd like to see this developed into something more than a chance encounter. It shows good potential. Maybe real romantic love will find its way to their hearts. Or maybe she will continue to use her twins cock for her pleasure while he remains reductant. I don't know how you decide but please come back for a chapter 2

I love a good brother/sister story but not when the the sister is a slut/whore. Just imagine all of the STD'S she has and now Johnny probably has as well. 1*

Proofread, proofread, proofread! "tongue muscles on her legs and stomach"? Really?

Spectacular story! Don’t let the naysayers put you off. Keep writing! I thoroughly enjoyed the story and I agree I’d love to see chapter 2!

Slut sister is not erotic. You need a proofreader.

Learn to spell....