by espeteroh
the goal so preservation of linda with her 'fragile' mind - so who put her at risk?
Absolutely GREAT story.
Please, continue it, I can't wait what comes next!
THIS IS PROBABLY THEM BEST STORY THAT I HAVE READ ON LITEROTICA.COM. I HAD A HARD ON FROM THE BEGINNING TO THE END. TRULY AMAZING. I CANT WAIT FOR CHAPTER 14 - 20. HOPEFULLY SOON. KEEP UP THE EXCELLENT WORK. VERY DESCRIPTIVE. IT WAS VERY TASTEFULLY WRITTEN AND WELL AS EXTREMELY EROTIC
I've read on Literotica. They're surprisingly moving. Even though I am now 63 I can still remember being Sam's age and the confusion he faces. Wonderful, wonderful writing. The women's characters are so finely drawn.
I have never been a fan of stories that lasted more than 3-4 pages. However, once I strted reading this series, I could not stop. My dick was hard for so long I had to stop reading and release the pressure. Are you going to continue or was this the last chapter? Please keep it CUMMING!!!!
I just finished reading the entire "sisters" series and I must say that it left me wanting more.
In chapter 12 Sam is all in love with Cathy and she with him! Sam and Dottie are planning an assault and manage a' trois with Anne! Anne is interested in Sam as an ocassional lover! Dawn has been put in her place by Sam for the while he was asleep BlowJob and seems completely out of the picture!!! Sam and Cathy and Anne are waiting for Linda to get better so thay can come up with a plan to get her to break up with Sam so he can be With Cathy !!! What the Hell Happened????????? You do a complete 180 and leave it hanging there with with no closure!!!!! I feel ripped off and I wasted my time reading what I thought was a great story only to be left hanging in the END!!!!!!!!!
What the heck was the first chapter all about? You introduce a character then dump her. Then the rest of the story you jerked us around from one sister (and friend) plus the Mom. In one chapter he's "in love" with Linda, then Cathy the Mom then the Baby Sis.
Complete rip of and a huge waste of time.
loved the story it wa such a turn on and it gave me a hard on. but I feel the story still has more life and chapters to it. I hope
Where is the rest of the story you can't just leave us hanging
Next time, read your own previous stories. Sam was going to break up with Linda, but he then begins to press her to continue the relationship.
What happened to his burning love of Cathy?
Where did the thing between Dawn and Linda come from?
I doubt I'll invest any more time reading your stuff, because your plots don't make sense, and I don't find that out until the absurd endings that don't make sense.
its been a while you should get back to this story
and a few more chapters
him going to college all3 of them would keep skiping and get together on holliday's
or meet at one or the others campus every few weekends once there out of college
they move in together and with time both linda & dawn get pregnate which is what they want to do
Your last date on here was in 2015, this chapter was published in 2005.
It is so damn disapointing when you get into a story which then just stops, even though the author wrote more elsewhere.
So just why didn't you finish this?
Rapier