All Comments on 'Six Month Devotion'

So getting pregnant is now considered 'breeding?' How animalistic.

"The next morning, after Evie had showered and dressed..."

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So is this supposed to be the continuation of some previous story, and do you think you stories are so magnificent people just instinctively know what that is? Really?

O.K. CLEVER WRITER, Hmmm. . . . .what was this all about ? Although I am into D/s, this story left me with an uncomfortable feeling. Would have liked more information about both GIRL'S background. Situation felt icky. And why did guy just disappear ? Would put this at the bottom of my list of liking your stories so far. Can't win ' em all ! Still, it's you, so , 5 STARS.