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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Confused

Enjoyed the story but was confusing to me. I have no idea who the characters are supposed to be or what the deal is with the owner. A little history would have been helpful

tiedupinthecellartiedupinthecellarabout 5 years agoAuthor
Apologies to confused

My apologies, I was trying to go for a mysterious vibe but I think I went too vague.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Good

I think it was great. Despite yes lacking information I don't think that took away from the story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Extremely interesting

Please write more! I loved the twist at the end with Worthless being Ruth's daughter. Also loved the sense of mystery; this is smut with an actually interesting and engaging story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Dear Tiedup

There are two types of people, those who can determine a conclusion from limited data . . .

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
WTF

Such a total lack of any real BDSM experience. Mystery is more than just being vague or unclear.

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I like twisted fantasies and wrote a few things for Lit. I do have a thing for humiliation, noncon fantasies, and super rough sex. If I have time, I like to RP but otherwise tend to caption GIFs and such, I like to see what everyone is into.