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It sounds very mechanical and reads a bit like a shopping list.

As for her role in the events well it looks like she did an awful lot considering the fact that she supposedly has a broken collar bone.

I thought the grammar was confusing, needed editing, maybe someone for whom English is not a mother tongue.

And in and out high capacity rifles shoot off in rapod succession, humans don't.