by Gamblnluck
Iam an older male who occasionally looks up erotica I most often shut it down again after reading paragraph as there is little or no story and the language is so crude.Ihave read seven chapters of this story.three things keep me reading.there is substance to the story, The language is dignified in the sexual content for the most part which doesn't denigrade sex which I like to think of as natural and wholesome .,and there is kindness included in the narrative.its great I like it.
I think it's great that Derek is such a nice guy, but I wish he'd stripe some butts more. Otherwise, great story series. Thanks for sharing.