All Comments on 'Slave Camp Ch. 17'

I know I’m in the minority, but I still think Kat’s punishment was, and is, way over the top. Definitely tired of Cheryl. And I’d be fine if Clarice got bit by a water moccasin or hit by a bus. Kat doesn’t deserve any shit from her. Clarice is a bitch. At this point, slave camp would probably be a nice vacation for Kat. Probably volunteer to stay there a few weeks. And what’s with punishing Kat for Cheryl and Clarice’s asshole behavior? The Derek in charge of Kat is NOT the Derek that deals with everyone else.

He is screwing up on this one. All the slaves are being punished for what THEY did (except maybe Wanda). Kat is the only one who felt guilty enough to ask to pay a penalty for her behavior. Derek and Lou jacked that situation up to the point Lisa got her sentence extended. That’s not on Kat. As for the rest, Cheryl already got her revenge on Kat and Kat got hit with a long sentence. Clarice, again, is just a total bitch. Fuck them all. I’m Team Kat and the rest can piss off.

This story gets better with every installment. I like the Siamese Twins' approach. I'm looking forward to reading more about the 'GIRLS', their boss, Lou and Sarah.

could have an addition to the krew??? yeah ,,, kat needs to grow up which l think we are starting to see happen. could we see kat and cheryl becoming twins? that might be interesting. lisa is another case, she needs to come to an understanding that she is not in charge of anything 'cept her ass. thinking lisa could benefit from spending some time out in the shed or over derick's knee until and unless she makes up her mind to join in as an equal with the rest of the krew.

"... a designated lesbian with a cock." Yup, that's Derek.

Please, Cheryl has been betrayed and abused by Kat, why does anyone think that they could get along? Cheryl was bought first and everybody new she had a horrible time because of Kat and Lisa, I did not understand why anyone thought it was a good idee to keep Lisa and Kat instead of sell them and now Cheryl is being punished because of that stupid decision.

So again her relationship becomes a place where her needs are not important and now her trauma is even used against her. It was weird that Cheryl was not send to a psychiatrist after her experiences (she thought that they would kill her) and now she is ordered to live and be friends with the persons that created her trauma. Lisa was even allowed to punish Cheryl (she pissed in her mouth!).

And probably the worse thing is that Derek buys the girls and then is being cuckold because he has absolutely no say in how his household is being run even punishment is something that others than him decide about. He is not even in control in his own bed.

I know you write fiction and that human emotions and reactions are secondary to the storyline but allowing abused women to be victimized again because their behavior is seen as bratty is something that should not happen in any story, fiction or not. For Cheryl the only way out now is depression and possible even death because she is in loose, loose situation. Kat and Lisa are still selfish, they never really said sorry for what they did and behaved like people who learned something.